Six Sentence Sunday: Bent Over The Table


An excerpt from Coming Home
Ryan definitely liked what he saw. She was tall, with legs that went on forever until they met at the sweet crossing he knew could bring this boy to his knees. As she bent over the pool table for her next shot, her ass stuck up into the air and swayed just slightly as if teasing him to inspect it further. Her entire body called to him. Shit, he hoped Davis had his sights on any other woman in that group because in his mind, he’d already laid claim on this one. And he wasn’t prepared to share.
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Coming Home will be available in November 2012.

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  1. You did a great job of showing Ryan's reaction and thoughts. I especially like the last line: "And he wasn't prepared to share." Cool.

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  2. I agree with Sandy. Nicely done.

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  3. I love an ass man! ;) Nicely done.

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  4. Best of the Sunday bests! I like how your words evoke a vision in my mind.

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