#Tantalizing Tuesday In A Kilt


Thanks to Tyra Berger for sharing this week's inspiration via facebook.
I swear every eye in the club turned to Master Connal as we entered. He was bare-chested and sculpted. Since his standard dress for the club was his native kilt, his delicious body was on display. Rounded muscle graced his arms, his chest and shoulders, with ridges of strength along his abdomen. I had run my fingers down that body more than I could count.
I may belong to him but he was all mine. That thought made me grin like a silly schoolgirl and not mind so much that others looked at him with admiration. He was mine. I fingered my collar and smiled. Once upon a time, his concentrated stare and rugged looks terrified me. The stubble from his beard, the disciplined gaze and the cleft in his chin gave him a fierce appearance. His muscles once intimidated me.
“Down,” Connal commanded when we reached the group of leather chairs where other Masters sat with their submissives. Connal sat in the remaining chair and I swept down to the floor with my legs tucked under me. With my head on his thigh, I laid claim.
He gently stroked along the side of my cheek and nodded. Nothing to fear.
 © Paloma Beck, Tantalizing Tuesday 2012

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  1. Uh oh, sounds like she's in for a dominating surprise. Nice post.

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  2. You painted a lovely picture and it drew me in! Nice post.

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    1. Thanks, Gemma. It was much more work to write from a photo someone else chose but I like how it turned out.

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  3. Such powerful imagery in this teaser. The masterful (pun intended)brush strokes of words is a true testament to the effectiveness of this teaser.
    Way to go Paloma!

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    1. thanks! I always look forward to your feedback.

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  4. I expect all the other submissives are as proud and possessive. :) Beautiful tease

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    1. As long as they know Connal belongs to Tyra! ;)

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  5. Oh, Paloma, you lucky muffin!! Wonderfully done and I am drooling at your good fortune:) xo

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    1. thank you. I stared at this photo for hours throughout the week trying to get an idea. So glad what came to me worked!

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  6. Very well done, Paloma! This is one of the few teases I've ever read where I could feel the love between a submissive and her master. Thank you for that. :)

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  7. This is my favorite Teaser for October 9th. The way you described with words the story behind the photo grabbed me. I appreciated that she had the dominance over him with his very masculine appearance.

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    1. Thanks, Pablo. I've always felt the sub's feeling of possessiveness over their Dom is often overshadowed. I wanted to bring that out in her description of him. Glad you liked it.

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  8. Powerful teaser. I love the way she feels he is hers, yet the dominance he has over her is obvious. Love it

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  9. A lovely tease. I'll have to check out the others too! :)

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