Tantalizing Tuesday With Bite






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"Will it hurt?” Caroline’s words came to him through a shaky breath against his ear. They were skin to skin. She sat on his lap facing him, their combined sweat the only thing between them. 

She should have known better. Nikko warned her repeatedly since the night they’d met. He told Caroline once he claimed her –once they made love- she would be his forever. And the foolish woman didn’t seem to care. She didn’t run like she should have done. There was no screaming, no retreat, no move to save herself.

“Of course, my delicious treat, love always hurts,” Nikko replied, wrapping his muscular arms tightly around her in a vice. Later when she called herself a victim, Nikko would remind her of the choice she made. Caroline might not have known exactly what he was but she knew he was dangerous.

These were his final thoughts as he turned his head into her body and sank his teeth into the curve of her breast. Her rich blood ran into his mouth and down his throat. Nikko immediately felt the calm flood him as Caroline’s blood gave him nourishment. As he took his fill, she clung to him.

© Paloma Beck, Tantalizing Tuesday 2012


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Comments

  1. I love this scene, which was so inviting with romance. Surprise at the end, when he bites into her as a vampire. Great tease for Halloween..

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    1. thanks, Pablo. I was trying for a surprise ending!

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  2. Sexy and hot! Gorgeous picture too!

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    1. When I saw the photo, I knew I had to write a story about it.

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  3. Fantastic tease Red hot, full of passion and perfect for Halloween

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  4. Now that puts the chills on the story. Damn, nice work there Paloma. You have a faithful fan here.

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    1. Thanks, Ray. I pulled out my darker side for this one! (one of my series in PNR so I channeled the hero from that!)

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  5. Love sexy, dark, Vampire stories! Damn, I gotta read more! :)

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    1. There is something just so sexy about vampires.

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  6. Chilling, but romantic too. Loved it

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    1. I couldn't write the scene without romance, even if it was an edgier scene.

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  7. Ooooh, nice. No wonder vampire erotica is so popular when there are exponents who can do it as well as this. Delicious in a sexy and macabre Halloween style.

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    1. *blush* what a wonderful compliment... thank you! :)

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