#TantalizingTuesday On The Stairs
Staunton barely made it into the house –never mind his bedroom- before stripping her down. He couldn’t think straight. Janna played with his mind whenever she was around. Staunton wanted her from the moment she walked into the bar where he was shooting pool with his friends.
Staunton and Janna were supposed to be taking a break. To hell with that - no way was Staunton letting another man have her and no way was he going home alone. His mind was locked onto one position and that was having her legs wrapped around him. Naked.
Now Staunton had her right where he wanted her - his hands on the sweet curves of her ass as she surrounded his hips with her long legs. He managed to get down to his jeans and stumbled up the stairs with her in his arms. Just a few more steps to the top before her incessant grinding was too much and he collapsed on top of her, his mouth finding every deliciously sensitive spot on her neck. Janna pushed down his jeans and his dick sprung out. With one adjustment, their bodies aligned and with a simple forward thrust, Staunton and Janna reconnected.
© Paloma Beck, Tantalizing Tuesday 2012
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Nice hot Tease Loved it
ReplyDeleteDamn hot and exciting erotic 200 words. Loved them on the steps of the stairs to reconnect.
ReplyDeletethought the idea of reconnecting on a place that is by definition a connection was poetic. thanks for reading. and commenting.
DeleteHot and beautifully written! Loved the pace!
ReplyDeletethanks, gemma, for taking the time to comment on my story.
DeleteThat was seriously hot. Loved it.
ReplyDelete*blush* thanks.
DeleteI love this photo and the story you crafted around it. The symbiotic "connection" was perfect, and perfectly hot. Who among us hasn't dreamed of being taken, fighting against time and place, lost to our will and dropped wherever we were, succumbing to our passions? I have and there is little sexier, hotter nor more 'satisfying'. This piece captured all of that and more. Absolutely loved the trip into my sordid past and your teaser:) xo
ReplyDeleteIt's always nice for a writer to know she's touched someone in that way with her words. Thank you for the thoughtful feedback.
DeleteLoved the pic it fitted your tease perfectly. An excellently crafted fast moving hot one. Brilliant
ReplyDeleteThanks. Wanted to bring the heat this week. Glad you liked it! ;)
ReplyDeleteO M G
ReplyDeleteLoved this. Great photo, great short.
Awesome.